A Last Flame

A Last Flame

A Poem by tiffanyrenee
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This poem is about what is inside pushing to follow your dream. (The poem is supposed to be shaped like a candelabra.

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Inside my heart

Thunder roars

Inside my soul

A dream soars

Open my eyes

To realize

My dream has yet to come true

Inside my brain

Ideas gained

Inside of me

I can see

What I need to do

To make my dreams come true

© 2013 tiffanyrenee


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You sure know how to write about the truth, don't you? A wonderful read, yet again. Dreams are something that can save us during hard times, help remind us what we are fighting for. Just keep believing and keep your head up. Don't let anyone tell you your dreams are dumb because chances are, they aren't because anything is possible if we put in the right dedication and minds to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Keep in mind, the pain that made the words that come to the light of readers, is one to be controlled. And you have it, that is what I liked about this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think its a beautiful write, Short and sweet filled with logic:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the power contained in this...it's a moment of taking control that very rarely gets realised :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great poem, I like the rhyme scheme and I can feel the hope and ambition in your words. Lovely work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely piece I feel the fire in it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very innocent feeling.
I appreciate your sense of responsibility to make your dreams come true.
Very lovely write.
Should inspire many to act in the positive direction.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I am tempted to print this off! This is nice...and inspiring too.

Don't worry...I wouldn't steal this and print it off and tape it without your permission. :0)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve

10 Years Ago

She has had a tough time of it. She lost her mom to cancer and her dad is a druggie...so she is rai.. read more
tiffanyrenee

10 Years Ago

Oh, well taking an interest in her is a huge help. :)
Steve

10 Years Ago

I think so too. she has a hard edge to her but she has a good heart.
so true :)
I can relate 100 percent.
Great poem and i liked the idea with the candelabra. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


tiffanyrenee

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
annabellee

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome :)
What a sweet poem.

And though you wouldn't know this, it's pretty apt for the place I currently am in my life.

Your poems always seem to make me grin lol. You did well. I'm glad you wrote this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


tiffanyrenee

10 Years Ago

Well, I'm very happy that I can place a smile on your face! I am so happy you like my work.
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