A wish

Another small poetry by me...it's a wish..

 

 

Wish you loved me the way I love you

Wish you cared for me the way I care for you

Wish you wanted me to be with you as I do

Wish you smiled at me the way I smile at you

Wish you cried for me the way I cry for you

I wish...wish...wish...

But alas again it's only a wish

Which I hope one day will come true......

Author's Note

please say if there's any mistake in it....

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

no mistake that this is an awsome love poem yet again u bring happiness in me ^-^
~Brittany

[clau]

There is no mistake in it. Is it so real and gives me warmth. I make this wish everyday, your poetry always relates to me... keep writing and never give up!

[Trée]

Riya, this is a very beautiful poem. I love the repetition, almost like a heart beat, reaching out. The tenderness is palpable. I think you have done a wonderful job and I see no mistakes. I do see someone with a lot of talent, a heart and soul worthy of creation. Hope to see you post more of your work.