Rain and People

Rain and People

A Poem by Riya_love is language of life
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It's kind of an sms which u can send to anyone who adores rain...

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The realtion between rain and people is just like two true friends...just think when rain pours everyone smiles with joy..
but on the other hand the sky cries...the thing is that when sky sees the people so happy it sheds tears
of happiness which is rain...in the same way we shed tears of joy when our friends are happy
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© 2008 Riya_love is language of life


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Riya_love is language of life
hope u all like it..

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This would be better if you fix the lines so they flow better
the second word you used, 'realtion' i think you meant 'relation'
i liked the comparision though
cheers, lea

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Riya_love is language of life
Riya_love is language of life

Kolkata, India



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I'm a girl of 14...and i love writing a lot...things come into my mind any time..maybe when i'm studying..chatting or even when i'm taking a shower...other than that i love singing and painting too..... more..

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