Live Today Like It's Your Last Tomorrow

Live Today Like It's Your Last Tomorrow

A Poem by dreamer :)

Bland.

The word I would use to describe my life before you came into it.

Sipid.

The word I would use to describe my life after you came into it.


I used to watch my life go by right before my eyes.
Now I enjoy every second of it.
Hold on to every minute of it.
And spend every moment like it's my last.
Because I don't want to go a minute without you.

It went from bland to sipid when I went from living without you,
To living with you. Now I know, though,
That I don't want you IN my life, I want you to be a part of it.

© 2010 dreamer :)


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Lovely, Lovely :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you plelitte and Angela Cookie Monster!!!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a good poem. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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wow, lovely full stop :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Liza!!! That was greatly appreciated!!!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was smooth
a helpful reminder
that we sometimes have to shift
our love with a sense of urgency
and appreciation
because it keeps the fires of love alive


Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you, Emily! That means a lot! I would love to see some of your writings! Thanks again for the nice comment!!! :) Glad you enjoyed reading it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really nice, nontraditional poetry. I enjoyed it a ton! Also, you have a great vocabulary. I would never have picked "sipid" as a word to use here, but it actually totally works. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I absolutely love to write!!! It's so much fun, and I always find myself either in a great book, or writing my own little story. It's the only way to escape the real world, and still express your emot.. more..

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