Together Forever

I want to spend every minute with you,
Not one second without you,
But soon enough,
I'm begging for some time alone.

I want to stay in your arms,
And never let go,
But soon enough,
I'm begging for some space.

I want to hold your hand,
And grasp it hard,
But soon enough,
I'm begging for you to leave.

I tell you I want time alone,
I tell you I want some space,
I tell you I want you to leave,
But what I really mean is,
NEVER leave me alone,
NEVER give me some space,
NEVER leave my side.

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[Jonathan De Elvira]

Simple yet powerful..
not to mention meaningful.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

And what love is will never be truly understood..well expressed..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

earnest depictions of the heart in struggle~ powerful poetic~

[FocusedAmnesia]

I like the desperation. It makes it that much more... real. Great read.

[Adelia Alighieri]

Great job, I love the desperation, it suits the prose.

[Forever Mine]

I love this ! I dont even know how to describe how much it means to me lol Sorry i have been trying to think of a way to explain this to my fiance and this pretty well did it : )