Healing Chances

Healing Chances

A Poem by lowriter
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Feelings of forgiving and second chances ..

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Glances, chances, glances, chances. Life goes on with its own romances.

We glide through, zoom and dart From place to place and heart to heart.

Wounds are healed with time, or so they say. Life would not want it any other way.

Glances, Chances, Glances, Chances. Life gives us our new romances.

Do we take joy in the songs of birds? For our songs are always heard.

I see my troubles washed to the shore. My heart is free, it hurts no more.

Glances, Chances, Glances, Chances. Love is us choosing our own romances.

© 2014 lowriter


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Hello there!

I really like your repetition of words and phrases here--it fits into the poem very nicely! Sometimes it's best to let life takes its course for a bit--to take a step back and breathe--while keeping in mind that we are the ones who ultimately decide our fates~~ As you said, "Love is us choosing our own romances."

Very nice piece, thank you for sharing it!

~MusicManiac

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! I really liked this! It is almost like you are writing a son. In fact, I think it would make a great song! Your poem is wonderful. It does all the things a poem is supposed to do. It brings the reader into your world, and touches the soul. Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hello there!

I really like your repetition of words and phrases here--it fits into the poem very nicely! Sometimes it's best to let life takes its course for a bit--to take a step back and breathe--while keeping in mind that we are the ones who ultimately decide our fates~~ As you said, "Love is us choosing our own romances."

Very nice piece, thank you for sharing it!

~MusicManiac

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 16, 2014
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Tags: glances, chances, place, heart

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lowriter
lowriter

pocatello, ID



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For me words are my release. I am new to strict structure in my writings, but i love the way you can describe almost anything. I have been writing for a while, and friends told me to go pro.. so here .. more..

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