Would you still love me

Would you still love me

A Poem by Raven moon
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Here’s another love poem enjoy

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If I told that was not the woman
You thought i was
Would You leave
If i told you i was never the woman you fell in love with
Will you walk away

If dreams was to be broken
And light became darkness
And stars disappear into the nothingness

would you stay
Will you still love me

If days became nights
And light will never shine

would you stay
Will you still love me

If i told you the stories of who I once were
If i told my dark past
Would you stay
Would you take me into your arms
And hold me still
The feeling of losing you
Just breaks my heart

Do you still love me
As much i love you

© 2019 Raven moon


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A wonderful poem. You asked hard questions.
"If i told you the stories of who I once were
If i told my dark past
Would you stay"
The above lines. Can be tested. I was a soldier once and I believe something must be bury and forgotten. Thank you Raven Moon for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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is this a question to yourself as much as it is a question to the one your love? If you don't love yourself all of it how could you ever believe another could love you? regardless of there true feelings. the sense of being unlovable will permeate how you see the relationship. these lines are very sincere and honestly expressed and the questioning calls

Posted 4 Years Ago


Raven moon

4 Years Ago

This poem was about someone who hides a dark secrets from her lover
A wonderful poem. You asked hard questions.
"If i told you the stories of who I once were
If i told my dark past
Would you stay"
The above lines. Can be tested. I was a soldier once and I believe something must be bury and forgotten. Thank you Raven Moon for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Raven moon
Raven moon

Honolulu , HI



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