hummmn

hummmn

A Poem by brenda

 

 

I feel like sticking my tongue out at you and

Not stop like a little naughty kid until you’re gone

I can be nice when I want to

You can not be nice because you just acted all out

Just like a grain of salt that’s disintegrate it from my heart

So goodbye actor/ I think I am the king of Rome!

 

 

 

 

 

 

deicated to jerks!

© 2011 brenda


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

well, the anger is certainly there. nice piece...glad i'm not on your "jerk" list!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am confused. But it certainly gets the point through! I love the last part "So goodbye actor/ I think I am the king of rome!" Very very fun!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun! This is a fun one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yea! Dedicate this poem to jerks! There are plenty out there!!! :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tootaloo!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

nice this one mande me laugh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

121 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 20, 2011
Last Updated on April 26, 2011

Author

brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



About
Music Playlist at MixPod.com love to plaster my feelings on paper.:) i am 15 years old and i love to write:D i seriously cant live withouth music and as you have noticed i love smiley faces!.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..