down to love !

down to love !

A Poem by brenda

Dear inexplicable feeling that I get when I see you

You are killing me, this feeling doesn’t really analyze the true one in you!

Dear down to earth girl, I will get you!

And I will catch you , as my name says catch!

I’m catch block no one can resist me! You will fall into three simple steps

1! 2… 3…4!

What’s going on?! She does not respond

Oh you silly, yeah well let me tell this straight to you… I am not who you think you are! And neither do you!

I am Nancy brown, the one that you broke her heart …

That bashful girl you told her “will you will marry” me to her

And I said no, because I didn’t want to be another of those “ale car tee” that you take them into your arms

And say I love you, while tell dirty lies, their only consent is that they will be in the only ones in your bed as so you tell them before getting to it... Ugh!

You are a b*****d, and now I have showed you … no better! I won! I tricked you!

The third step in a down to love girl is no love

And excuse me “Mr. Catch” but I have to go

“Taxi!!!”

I love you, you have showed me up!

Let’s marry lets live-in the suburbs

I can’t! I have proven that woman can never fall in love

That they are not easy to trick

You know if woman were earth

Their tears will be water being wasted

 Millions of tissues used to dry them off are actually taking part in the process of

Wasting trees… and men! They just don’t see what they do!

Well I showed that women aren’t dolls they aren’t tissues you can throw away

And here you come saying you love me

Well like I prove my point, I would not fall for you and if I do, it will be when you show you really love me

Cause every woman is worth it!

Their price isn’t measured with a price tag that you can scan!

Each woman is worth more than you think

It is up to you men “dear cashiers” to find how much value we woman are to you.

If we value one dollar for you … then you are jerks! Then go on! Get on with your life and don’t pay mind to us

If we are not worth it!

Don’t hurt another girl!

Well, but who am I to say do not, when man are little children that not means “go ahead and do it “

Now if you will excuse Mr Catch ill be going now and if we end up together then I was worth your whole lie.

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
pink is fro the one that plays the role blue is for the actor and purple well that is just me puting what i think about this hope you like it btw the movie is titled down to love !

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Nice maturity in this. I can tell you'll do fine when it comes to finding the "right man"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The metaphors used here along with sense of story telling is simply awesome :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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boredom city:p!!!, FL



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