Me :)

Me :)

A Poem by brenda

i am a little girl
sweet, with innocence shown in my eyes
i dont accept envy or hate
about to grow up but i will never lose my inner child

when rain pelts my window
i want to run outside and get wet
if there is a big puddle, i will step on it
i love bubbles and everything that shines like sparkles!
i know i am fifteen but acting grown up takes fun out of life
when i meet someone i am quiet as a mouse
when i see i can trust them i talk till their ears explode !
when i know i can trust you, i will always be there for you
even though i am a girl, i get more along with boys.
do not ask me why because i dont really know

when i get inspired i even make the poem rhyme withouth trying too
each time i lose a friend i discover a new one
i love sailing in the clouds when it comes to liking someone
sometimes the fall is to long and too hurtful
but i learn from mistake
i hope some day to find my prince, i will not rush
i will wait like fiona on the tower till he will come to rescue me.
i truly love singing
with my heart marking the rhythm of each beat and each note
in a song
if there will be anything more to add will be that i love meeting new people
and having new adventures,
i am a happy girl, with great friends and ready for lifes motives and obstacles  

© 2011 brenda


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Author's Note

brenda
for the school group !:)

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Why is of no importance... you succeeded...and did well.

It took effort.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a lovely poem. It has a warm and happy feel to it. "I love sailing in the clouds when it comes to liking someone" is a beautiful line.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope this poem do great in your school group..
this is an amazing poem..i really liked it..
and i also get to know u by this piece:)
good luck! keep writing!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. you sound very self confident:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very nice! I love the happy feel:) What I would suggest is that you remove the last word 'inside' in your fourth line since it is repetitive because you already used the word inner. Good write:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a poem!!! Full of meaning that wish I had when I was 15 lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 13, 2011
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brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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Music Playlist at MixPod.com love to plaster my feelings on paper.:) i am 15 years old and i love to write:D i seriously cant live withouth music and as you have noticed i love smiley faces!.. more..

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