YOU DONT OWN ME

YOU DONT OWN ME

A Poem by brenda

You want to hold my hand?

After you exchange germs with her?

 

ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND!?

 

Don’t think ill be like a dog and you be my leash

I am a free bird, ready to fly.

I will never did hold you back

So now ill tell you straight.

 

You are not my father,

I am not called “stuff”

I am a woman ready to embrace her freedom!

© 2011 brenda


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thats right sista kick him to da curb, lmaoo good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would love to know the motivation behind this one. Very direct and to the point. Well done Brenda

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like somebody is getting the boot! Very direct.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful indeed. Great job


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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boredom city:p!!!, FL



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