why?!!!!! i exclaim !!

why?!!!!! i exclaim !!

A Poem by brenda

I feel like crying

I was optimistic in everything

Now I just want to lie in a corner

Talk to my true friends and tell them everything

 

I should have stopped running

But me stubborn as a mule

Did not listen to consequences and now

Now this is done

Ill lose weight on a week basis

 

I feel like crying

Now for this I may have to be even more careful in doing sports

Why?!!!! I ask you god you know me

Why another wall in my way?

Do I destroy the wall?

Because right now

Whatever the doctor says it’s my destiny to be for now.

 

 

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
my ankle hurts so i ahve to rest and yeah thts what the doctor said !:p

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I love how you can write a poem about absolutely anything. If I want to write a poem I never know what to write about. It's really good how you can write a whole 3 verse poem about your ankle hurting in such a dramatic way :) well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


it's only when you are hurt that you'll know his healing powers :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wondered what you did. You poor baby you will heal soon. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another great write, this however is more poetic, so I prefer this one :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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