all for you

2008

erotic fear

holding deep

don't let go

just hang on

exotic death

clutches my chest

rips out my heart

dear friend

it ends here

in the beauty of the soul

bask in the glory

of what was

we were amazing

but you are strong

i am forever yours

as i lay dying

i cry out for mercy

my last breath

is forever you

Reviews

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Jessie Dana,

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*breathe*

Seems a bit like you just needed to get this out! Your pace was so fast and brave... I have this "friend" has written this style (most of her adult life), it is a wonderful feeling when you can expell what you indeed need to just say.

I love the fast flowing short verses, typically they are not MY friend... (I am no good at it).

This was a great rendition of your emotions.

Have a wonderful day,

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