The Tears She Could Not Cry

The Tears She Could Not Cry

A Poem by Luissanto
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Written by Louis Saint Verges

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There were tears she could not cry
and so much pain which filled her life
so much anger lied in her heart
which was tearing her apart.
She went to church to find a friend
and for her broken heart to mend,
but what she found was nothing but lies
and nothing but silent and painful cries
of people who were being used
and hurt very deeply from all the abuse.
All under the guise, of the father's love,
which lies up in heaven, way up above.
She went to church looking for God,
but what she found was definitely not.
Now she has even more pain in her life
and is stuck with the tears,
that she still cannot cry.

© 2014 Luissanto


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Sometimes that pain is so great that we search for salvation and answers, that release from the prison that we have built inside our hearts.. We get frustrated and disheartened at every turn unable to find the answers that we seek.. The angel that can deliver us from the pain.. The understanding that will allow us to release the fears, the hurt, and enable us to let go and move on... The hand we can hold that allows us to lean on them and pour our emotions out showing that vulnerability and give us strength we need to overcome and rise from the ashes.. release the bonds that hold us back and keep us in the depths of our despair... nicely done again my friend.. you write with great depth of emotion and honest real feeling..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank You very much, your words always inspire and move me...
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

likewise my friend... :)

you are more than welcome...



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Sometimes that pain is so great that we search for salvation and answers, that release from the prison that we have built inside our hearts.. We get frustrated and disheartened at every turn unable to find the answers that we seek.. The angel that can deliver us from the pain.. The understanding that will allow us to release the fears, the hurt, and enable us to let go and move on... The hand we can hold that allows us to lean on them and pour our emotions out showing that vulnerability and give us strength we need to overcome and rise from the ashes.. release the bonds that hold us back and keep us in the depths of our despair... nicely done again my friend.. you write with great depth of emotion and honest real feeling..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank You very much, your words always inspire and move me...
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

likewise my friend... :)

you are more than welcome...
So much meaning and emotion gets put into your writing and it really is amazing. I can relate because i write about my pain and troubles. This is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Your words truly honor me... coming from such a great writer as yourself.
Sometimes the only comfort we can find is within ourselves, no higher power will answer our prayers, unfortunately some scars run too deep. Well said Luis.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

10 Years Ago

Beautifully put...Thank You
though its sad but its amazing. your words totally grab other feelings too. Welldone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I always said that if I was going to write, it woul.. read more
Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

yes you are. your welcome :)
very beautiful, i can totally relate...there's just too much hate in this life...i like how you put all those emotions in words!
Great ink,penn on :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Luissanto

10 Years Ago

Thank You very much for such beautiful and inspiring words. They mean a lot to me.
Brave girl

10 Years Ago

you are welcome

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Luissanto

Woodside, NY



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My name is Luis Santos Verges and I have a passion for graphic design and writing. It is my belief, that poems are inner reflections, "Soul Tattoos" that are meant to live forever. This grou.. more..

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