Remember Me

Remember Me

A Poem by Sophie
"

wrote this in algebra after months of not writing a decent poem. it felt so good

"

Remember me even when I'm gone

remember me to the tune of every song

remember me like the clouds in the sky

remember me like everything that has an unanswered 'why?'


Remember me like the wolves' mournful scream

remember me like the sunset on the sea

remember me like your name on the wind

remember me like you'll never remember again


And after it all,

once I'm gone,

remember me as if I was the rain

and love me as you'll never forget pain.

© 2013 Sophie


Author's Note

Sophie
reviews please! (long time no see, eh?)

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Cool piece! Repetition was real epic and nothing like I've seen. I really enjoy your pieces. They're like a drug kinda. They take away all the dark stuff of the world and throw it away as I read. Keep writing the wonderful pieces!

Posted 7 Years Ago


that was pretty epic :)
I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice! its so full of emotion and very captivating! the rhyming really works in this and the continuous use of "remember me" makes it flow

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a nice poem and full of emotions and i love it. 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This short poem had me almost to tears. I really look upi to you as a writer, how do you convey so much with saying so little? Amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sophie

7 Years Ago

oh my gosh that means so much! I just wrote this in the middle of algebra I really didn't work on it.. read more
I love this. :) nice job. its been awhile since i've read and reviewed something of yours!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is awesome

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the poem. Remind of the great farewell poems of the past. I like the desire to be remembered with good thoughts when we are gone. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMAZING it's so mysterious and conveyed so well

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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