I Am Young

I Am Young

A Poem by Sophie
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also in math

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I would like to write
a poem
that encompasses the whole world
but I can't
because the world
is made of
too many things I don't know

© 2013 Sophie


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Sophie
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Your desire in the poem is the dream of many writers. I have read the masters of writing. Most lived a wild and crazy life. I believe most of them learn. We must do what we can with our given tools. We must save ourselves and tried to do some good in our world. A big world with many problems. I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to thoughts and question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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no matter how hard we want it we can never know all

Posted 6 Years Ago


A novel wouldn't even be able to do that. This is different. I don't think I've read any poems like this yet. You have astonished be once again.


Posted 6 Years Ago


This is beauty and humbleness and youth in it's purest form. Great Piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your desire in the poem is the dream of many writers.
I would like to do the same but don't know how I would to do eather.
good write tho.
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I see what you wish to do, but may I be blunt, I don't see the signifigance of the name of the piece it's classifying. It's good overall, but I didn't get the name part.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your desire in the poem is the dream of many writers. I have read the masters of writing. Most lived a wild and crazy life. I believe most of them learn. We must do what we can with our given tools. We must save ourselves and tried to do some good in our world. A big world with many problems. I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to thoughts and question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very insightful. :) I really like this. Great Job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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