Burning Answers

Burning Answers

A Poem by Trisha

Letters to the sky, I reach out in soul

I speak in past tense because him I know

Burning words dance on my finger tips, as I repeat the spell times three

time releases the wind's of change......... whipping up leaves from my favorite tree

ashes are all that's left,  I cover it with earth

I close my eyes to the scent of destiny

I know my prayer was heard

 

Dancing crow upon the sky he comes to deliver a message

 I open my eyes to receive, as I thank him for his presence

a song came on the radio, the words did make sense

The Name is clearly displayed on the back of a black canvas..

 

 

© 2008 Trisha


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Thank you all.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a beautiful write.. communing with nature, seeking an answer. The best way to find any answer is to clear your mind, give the question to the universe and you will get an answer.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. The format of the words remind me of whispers on the wind.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Visual poem, I like the way you give meaning to nature (as it should be) and events. There are messages all around us to be hear if we listen. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. I love being with nature. The peace and quiet allow the soul to rest. Description and story was excellent.
Coyote



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

wow. I am liking this one. memories are great sometimes. and you can write about them in such great ways. great work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, very magical! I can imagine the casting of a spell on a dark night... very pretty~ And I really liked the first line about writing letters to the sky - that's certainly a unique way to look at prayer. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Trisha
Trisha

Whispering Winds, ID



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