The Eyes

The Eyes

A Poem by Mary

Their watching you, you know

Every day and night

Even in the misty moon light,

You come and go

They always know

Oh, how they give me a fright,

The eyes they see

Everything you’ve done to me

You cannot stop the eternal sight.

© 2010 Mary

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I have the feelings somthings watching me. Thats why at night i carry a staff for protection.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wow even though it was really short it was filled with emotions andmeanings that totally broke free I loved it It was absolutely brilliant.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome. I love it. ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is a wonderful poem! The fear and bottled up anger blend perfectly well together. I especially liked the last line; "You cannot stop the eternal sight." Brilliant! So much was said in such a short poem, great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 31, 2010
Last Updated on January 31, 2010
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