In Between

In Between

 

A single silent moment,

No movement

Or sound,

I sit in complete darkness.

 

My eyes locked away

My mouth sewn shut

My hears stuffed with cotton,

 

I know nothing

I feel nothing

I am nothing

 

By breath gone,

My heart stalled,

I wait for death

 

But it never comes,

I am stuck

In this state of madness

Neither life nor death,

But limbo

 

I cannot move

Or plead for help,

Will somebody kill or save me?

 

Where is the light in this darkness?

Author's Note

please review:)

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is a sad write, almost like your longing to be lifted by life. beautifully written

Ok that was extremely... EMO!!! Good. But EMO!!!

[chaffy]

i like this. nothingness. sometimes being on a side would be better, but the people whom are on a side would probably chose the between.. love the ending though.. where is the light in this darkness. :) keep writing! love your poems.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I agree Lilith you are good at writing and I especially like how you describe the feeling and empty, nothingness in the poem. im scared of limbo now!!!!! :Z

[Lilith]

This was good! The short lines and stanzas help emphasize the "nothingness" you are describing. Keep writing, you're good at it!