Shattering Moment

Shattering Moment

A Poem by Mary

All my thoughts focused,

My mind at ease,

I just what I wanted to be,

Fine.

 

I was not thinking of you,

I was not dreaming of you,

I was not crying because of you,

I was free of your power.

 

But then it happened.

I saw you.

 

You where leaving,

And I had just arrived.

What a silly twist of fate,

A pleasant surprise.

 

Our eyes met.

My breath caught.

And a smile formed on my lips.

I was yours again.

 

You didn’t even say hi,

But you greeted me in your own way.

And I couldn’t help but laugh.

 

You filled my thoughts,

And stole my soul.

Only around you I felt whole.

But I knew it wouldn’t last.

 

You would soon become past,

Or so I hoped.

Because you,

No matter how much I wanted,

Where not mine.

 

So I lied to myself,

Every second after.

But all I could remember,

Was my spontaneous laughter,

And your blue eyes.

© 2010 Mary


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This is a great write as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


cool nice peace of art

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this, poetry is so easy its complicated. create your own world. go ahead, its addicting

Posted 12 Years Ago


simple..
but then enjoyable..
good work..

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading it, it gave an image of a small story. Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


My opinion of this piece is simple, it's good. You captured an emotion in this piece,

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really like this. good job.

-kara.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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J.M
This is a really beautiful poem, and i particularly like the line 'You would soon become past'. You've really captured a moment in this piece. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is pretty! I think that you captured the character's emotions very well. good job! :) glad you are starting to write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice poem but im confused why add blue eyes?


Posted 12 Years Ago



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