Aquarium Skipping

well...

I think the fish are starving, dear

you haven't fed them in a year -

The water's green, the glass like milk

the guppies' gulping fecal silk

Guarami watch you walk on by

and soothe the goldfish with a lie

I wonder how the mollies feel?

the plecostomus, he knows the deal.

 

You've turned your tail to more tropical waters

Chasing after young sea otters.

Reviews

[Anton Cancre]

You're so playful... anger and jealousy are rarely this much fun.

"Fecal silk"- the new milk

[HoorayForUnderdog]

OMG this is too funny and sad at the same time. You ROCK!

[holly]

What a terrific poem - scans beautifully, gorgeous images and the oh-so-sly double meaning. I really, really liked this and hope to read more!

[Larissa G.]

Hm. It's interesting, I had to read it several times to try and find a possible meaning. So I guess that's good if you got me thinking...

[yinseriv]

Wrong, so wrong...LOL