Aquarium Skipping

Aquarium Skipping

A Poem by luthien7
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well...

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I think the fish are starving, dear

you haven't fed them in a year -

The water's green, the glass like milk

the guppies' gulping fecal silk

Guarami watch you walk on by

and soothe the goldfish with a lie

I wonder how the mollies feel?

the plecostomus, he knows the deal.

 

You've turned your tail to more tropical waters

Chasing after young sea otters.

© 2008 luthien7


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You're so playful... anger and jealousy are rarely this much fun.

"Fecal silk"- the new milk

Posted 12 Years Ago


OMG this is too funny and sad at the same time. You ROCK!

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a terrific poem - scans beautifully, gorgeous images and the oh-so-sly double meaning. I really, really liked this and hope to read more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hm. It's interesting, I had to read it several times to try and find a possible meaning. So I guess that's good if you got me thinking...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wrong, so wrong...LOL

Posted 12 Years Ago



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luthien7
luthien7

Cincinnati, OH



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I love to read and I have been writing for many years. I do not dream of being a great and famous writer, I just want to write something fun and have anyone else enjoy it. I am glad to offer cons.. more..

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