Fooled

Fooled

A Poem by luthien7

Redundant, saying - "Crime of passion!"

Tell your sweet lies walking;

I can't be fooled in this foul fashion,

though still I hear you talking.

A knowing caution this lover's pain

as coined by poets, minted gold;

finding myself caught again

within your lusty hold.

© 2008 luthien7


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This poem perfectly illustrates the emotional turmoil we all have experienced at least once in our lives...informed self-indulgent possibly self-destructive behavior...isn't love grand?

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a nice counterpoint to the ballade you presented. I love the surrender to a web of passion even when knowing it is a cotton candy mire of lies.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 12, 2008

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luthien7
luthien7

Cincinnati, OH



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I love to read and I have been writing for many years. I do not dream of being a great and famous writer, I just want to write something fun and have anyone else enjoy it. I am glad to offer cons.. more..

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