LOVE

LOVE

A Poem by lua
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and its composition

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I am a body made to be loved and I know

this because

I do not love anyone and as

humans we

are all filled with,

built upon

love

it is this that creeps through our

bones in the early hours of

the morning when our eyes are hollow and

our hearts are

racing each

other

and I let yours win because

I need to

know you love me so

I don’t appear as empty as

I feel

sometimes I wonder how I am

not a pile of bones on the floor

under your feet

you are so much stronger

than

I am and I

love you 

© 2019 lua


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Enjoyed this deep poem thanks for entering my comp

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lua

1 Year Ago

thank you :)
i like the giving in, and giving up to the feelings...the admittance of bowing to the feet of another...to admit lack of strength in fighting the feelings...
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lua

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
i really enjoyed this; there's a desperation and humility to it that's heartwarming and charming

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lua

3 Years Ago

thank you, yes, that is the exact essence behind this
I can feel the emotion, seems as though you lost someone very close or someone you love is going through something tough. Lines 8-12 really made me cheese:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


lua

3 Years Ago

haha thank you :)
Wait, wait, wait. I am confused by this. I'm guessing the last few lines were meant for someone but I don't get the beginning part. Can you explain this to me?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lua

3 Years Ago

sorry, i totally understand your confusion. i wrote this about the feeling of yearning for love and .. read more

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Added on January 5, 2017
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lua

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