BETWEEN THE RIPPLES

BETWEEN THE RIPPLES

A Poem by lua
"

winter weather

"

                  a grey day                            

                    to meet

                  my grey wishes

           I do not need to look outside to see

                        the thick mat

                              of clouds

                      for today they

                               occupy me

                        the rain

                                          forming puddles at my feet

                                    a single splash under

                                           a single toe

                     at my feet

                       between the ripples

                 I can see my reflection

                     a window

                       to the sky

                         for today

                            it resides in

                                    my eyes 

© 2019 lua


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I love your writing style! Your unique meter (and the lack of it at times) make you stand out among the many. I look forward to reading more of you work :)

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lua

1 Year Ago

thank you, i really appreciate your feedback :)

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