we r one

we shldn't encourage segregation en discrimination! i just pity people who do it coz we r one, brothers en sisters whether u like it o nt

we r one,

you, me, us and them...

we r one

 

even the setting shows

we may be different but we r one

there several countries, seven continents

but there is still one world!

 

the fact that

we breathe the same air,

we have the same creator..

that makes us one

 

the language we speak,

the colour of the skin or

country of origin

they dont matter.

 

so all i ask is..

forget the differences

and focus on the similarities

 

stop fighting,

for it just tears us apart

and leaves us un healed wounds..

embrace the brotherhood!

love you all.....

Author's Note

yeh this is just i dnt knw.... all i knw is we r one read, love en review.. sorry if i offended anyone in the course.

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

;like i always say:)
u said it too..
thx for the peace keeping effort

[luviva]

welcome my dear friend!
lets just continue and see whether more people will get the core point.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes i hope they do too

[Kamran Javed]

this is well conveying and we are one just is symbolically presenting here.

[luviva]

thanxx

[Muse]

Amen to that...btw..do you text a lot?

Your note to readers..and your use of short hand below:
yeh this is just i dnt knw.... all i knw is we r one read, love en review.. sorry if i offended anyone in the course.

Just saying..?

[luviva]

no actually i dont text alot bt i "facebook" alot!!
thats why i use lots of short forms.

[luviva]

and it was my first poem..
i was just writing the usual way

[patricia]

the dawning of connectedness in all its beauty shines through this poem. A sensitive warm write.

[luviva]

thanxx D

[Devanshu Rajput]

well this was already read by me...but i did not got time to review it...nice poem capturing a great message...you said true we live in one world,we eat same food,sun is one for all of us,we have two eyes,two ears,one nose,two legs,two hands etc...we are of different religion...the religion dosen't comes with us in this world...it is given by humans on earth...why we don't live in harmony....if we live together so we can fight against crime,evilness etc...great poem...excellenty done...great piece...keep doing great jobs like this...really loved it...

[luviva]

thank you so much!!
appreciate your visit and you are so true in your words.
thanxx again :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

welcome again

[Ahmad Cox]

So true and beautiful at the same time.

[luviva]

thanxx AHMAD
real appreciate it :)

[Sirius King]

forget the differences

and focus on the similarities

i totally agree...its a new time, its a new day...everyone is equal- so lets act like it!

[luviva]

well am glad it spoke to you,..
thanxx for the review!!

[Sirius King]

it did... thanx for sharing! :-)

[kelvin]

Very nicely written read hear i agree for can you imagine this world we live in was the total opposite of what it is today, oh what a beautiful place it would be oh yes there should be disagreements that's what makes us unique but not to the point to where we kill and destroy each other yes we must coexist to be here this is one planet we may all speak in different ways or languages but the word peace, love, together, and so on in any other language means the same. as always keep writing fellow writer

[luviva]

well thank you so much for the review!

[kelvin]

you're very welcome

[Shellie]

This is a common topic in writing, but out of all them I really connected with yours for the fact its simply put, but well put and well written.

[luviva]

thanki you sooo much!!
real appreciated :D

[Frieda P]

This is lovely, you're like a beautiful dove messenger of peace with your words.

[luviva]

ohhh thank you soo much!!
actually all i advocate for in this world is peace, its reflected in my poetry i want it so bad just wish others want as i want it/!!

[Frieda P]

I know, 'all we are saying, is give PEACE a chance'

[luviva]

loved that quote, "give PEACE a chance", and you are right