sidelines

sidelines

A Poem by luviva
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well.. poem it is

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i stand on the sidelines

not venturing no further

for no one dares cross the line.

 

standing on the side lines is the option

craning  your neck for a peak

at what lies further that skin

 

for the fear of whats

really underneath that rotting

filth.

 

scary for the cowards..

but the brave stand tall..

they walked it they went for it

 

the quitters didnt get far

the winners have glory for show

for it wasnt scary..

 

it is life..

some are scared of it

some think of it as filthy

 

but it is what it is...

you just gotta know how to go about it

and it is your to tame.

 

life is to be concurred and lived by you...!

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
well it is what it is..
read n make of it what u can..!
review are welcome

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Very meaningful message. Truly, this invokes courage and confidence. It reminds people that life is better lived in the front lines rather in the sides. Though, your choice of words weren't very creative, it was simple and attractive in its way. Good piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


luviva

7 Years Ago

Thanks appreciate it:)
either we accept or not, we have to accept life as it is and try to get the best of it. very nicely penned..

Posted 7 Years Ago


luviva

7 Years Ago

Thankx for the review ;p
Nicely written with encouragement and courageous descriptions all wrapped up in a clever, serious, piece, very well done Luvivia!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Encouragement with courageous sentiments all wrapped up nicely in this piece which reads well,nice work, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

7 Years Ago

thank you:)
Living life on the sidelines is hardly living at all, your words scream be brave and carpe the hell out of this diem! Good message luviva.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

7 Years Ago

most appreciated is the review and the time devoted... love L

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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