when it cries..

when it cries..

A Poem by luviva
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well yeh..

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when it cries,

no tears flow

but it sure hurts.

 

when it cries

nobody sees

nobody knows

 

when it cries

it hurts,

such pain only known to the owner

 

it is the HEART <3

© 2014 luviva


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Even when tears do not flow, the pain is real and is felt. Perhaps it is felt by more than just you....you might not realize the depth of emotion flowing around you. Beautifully said. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

6 Years Ago

thank you for dropping by..
always appreciate the reviews.
Such a quiet and gentle expression of pain. Those sincere of feeling are often subdued in expressing their hurt and disillusionment. You are once such poet of noble thoughts and words. Thanks for this great poetry. I learnt something from it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahhh, good point my friend, blood tears perhaps...probably the most affecting kind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Life, those curve balls ya know? My kid is driving me bonkers.....you guys ;-)
luviva

7 Years Ago

lol... i understand having kids is a real rollercoaster..
but also sweet heyy
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Yep, best and worst of.................

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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