blood on the shore

blood on the shore

A Poem by lyricalprince
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this is a little dark plz review!

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                                Blood On The Shore 
                    What do you do when your child's world turns black
                    when your child is vunerable to the attacks?
                    what do you do when your child loses the fight?
                    when they ascend up to the passage of light
                    what do you do when your child hangs from a rope?
                    do you cry? do you weep? do you lose hope?
                    do you live a life of sadness with your heart broke?
                    do you live a life of lies and become a living joke?
                    what will happen i can't say just be ready on that day
                    when the day your world goes black the choice is yours
                    what will yo do when your child's blood washes on the shore?
            

© 2013 lyricalprince


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lyricalprince
Honestly I didn't like this poem because it focuses on the negative not the positive.
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This is one of that makes you hold your breath until the very last word, I thought it was really strong. Vivid..


Posted 6 Years Ago


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lyricalprince

6 Years Ago

thank you egg I really appreciate it
Jesus Antichrist that was dark! (see what I did there) Although I've found that its more difficult to write about the dark well than it is to write the more upbeat poems. This is a great example of Dark poetry done right!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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lyricalprince

6 Years Ago

thank you ( and I saw what u did there) I am not happy with this poem cause I get a lot of hate mail.. read more

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Added on June 22, 2013
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