Blocks

There's a child trapped inside
A house without windows, doors, or sound
No locks, just the blocks on the floor
Left over
From broken worlds
Meant to be built up again,
And again...
In the hopes that one will be right,
That one will look like the world outside
But she's never been outside

Reviews

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This poem can mean several things. Which is great cause I love things with multiply meanings . Anyway what I see on first look is kind of some mental disorder when person how to deal how to connect to outside world with no knowledge of social skills.

Or is another fantasy to just be left alone and build around your self higher walks with watch towers and angry guard dogs.


Also is reminds me one punishment of my mother. Sometimes she lock me into ladder and switch off light. It was quiet fun to search for jam and chocolate at darkness . Anyway I really did enjoyed your poem.

[Indra's Child]

Thank you
It has a lot of differing meanings to me.

Honestly though, your poetry is some really unique amazing stuff. Grateful to have found it for real

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I think everyone can be able to make own unique writing. Just not to follow any advices of wise men. Or not to write to please someone just be yourself when you writing like at real life. But anyway thank you it's always good to know there is someone who like my writing. Don't worry your writing have unique style too. There is lot of truthful expressions and emotions.

[Indra's Child]

Thank you Nexus. love the name

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Ha thank you. My pen name is taken from my favorite book by Henry Miller. Also this Latin word have multiple meaning. It's can be some point what connecting more then one or two things. Or it's can be also connected to different thoughts , ideas. And it's can also mean very special and important place.

[Indra's Child]

Beautiful.