Untitled No. 5

I have forgotten your

favorite song on your

favorite album but I

can still remember

the way your song like

breath hit every

note on my lip

stained neck.

(M.S.)

Reviews

[Neon]

Ok! I got it! "Love makes you more beautiful than you already are."
Yup! That's an interesting piece to read! I adore this write because here I can see the beauty of love that's defined into the words of an angelic heart..that does beat for her someone and Am sure her someone knows how lucky he is to be dating an angel n of course, living his whole life with her alias with you.

Nice work! You gonna be get success very soon in this writing's field, Maddi, if you do write more and more and really wanna do something awesome in this creative field as well.

All the best, pretty!

[Maddi Snowden]

Awh thank you. Most of these poems are written about ex-boyfriends when I was dating them. Or people I would like to date. I really appreciate your kind words.
Thanks again! (:

[Neon]

Ah! That's why I was thinking how you are so experienced. Now, I think, being living in hurt, pain seemed your rights because I think, your heart got hurt not by your special one but many ones at all ... Anyway, You've a great writing talent and I hope your gonna cool with the life with your these talent skills.
Keep writing!
Well, May God bless your life!