Sea of Shadows

Sea of Shadows

A Poem by To be scene To be heard

Ice salty tears.
Fall to the ground.

Flowing from my eyes.
A never ending waterfall.

But this isn't a beautiful sight.
The pain is over barring.
I've casted you off.
Into the Sea of Shadows.

Where my lost loves lies.
Ripping at one another.

There black piercing eyes striking me.
Shelton hands reaching for my flesh.

I turn away and find you.
I've never loved until I met you.

Never caught a glimpse of its magic.
Of is overflowing power.

It was to much.
I couldn't hold on.

You got to close.
To that dreadful edge.

I blew a silent wind.
That casted you off.

Into the dark and lonely sea....

© 2012 To be scene To be heard

Author's Note

To be scene To be heard
Not my best work

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yes now this is very well penned, this write would be amazing in my new contest "Rock and Roll Heart Failure" I like the context of this write. Amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago

Awww. Saddening but heartfelt. I can feel the hurt and wanting to be released to the sea.. Stunning write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I think this is so beautiful. Well written with great metaphors.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is beautiful poetry. Using the sea to make your point. I like the feel of sadness and the desire to release the pain into the wind and the sea. Thank you for the outstanding poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Bittersweet emotions, beautifully expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 22, 2012
Last Updated on May 22, 2012

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