Rain Tonight

Rain Tonight

A Poem by Charley
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A poem I wrote for the River of Words contest

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Natural static

Swaying in the wind


A low  swelling to a  BANG

roar


Sharp dots behind the Crackle

Slowly take the foreground

That one, Fierce split of air,

Rumbling across

   the  

A    T     M O  S    P      H  E     R E


Then quick,  L

      I

G

  H

T

I

  N

T

 E

    R

  R

U

  P

T

  S,

Casts SHADOWS upon the formerly unseen


Darker,

darker,  

the pounding intensifies


F r i g i d  pinpricks          my face

      tickle


s

l

 i

  d

   i

    n

     g


down

my

sloped

visage



T i l t e d  u p  and eyes shut tight


Lighting,  

Thunder,

 rain tonight


© 2014 Charley


Author's Note

Charley
On Google Drive, there are many more fonts available, so this looked cooler on there... Aesthetics though

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Wow this is such a good read! Very creative :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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JC
very creative, the way you place words takes us on a ride and damn if i don't love thunder and lightening...you described it incredibly well. was a fun read. I wish there was a storm now...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on November 3, 2014
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Tags: rain, thunder, lightning, poems, tonight, shadows

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Charley
Charley

Lafayette, CO



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I love writing stories. I often have ideas, but they don't all get onto paper. Most of my stories remain unfinished, but I'm hoping to change that. *update* November 2015 I wrote a whole novel.. more..

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