Regret

Regret

A Poem by Rae

I never really ever minded
not remembering to ever mind
because the body does not mind
what brains and shames do mind
and minding what you should not mind
is like minding time that does not mind.
I minded you,
you minded me free
I minded what
we were not to be
I minded that you
did softly agree
that I minded you
and you minded me
and that
time minded you
away from me.

© 2015 Rae


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Very clever. A very deep thinker. Excellent job. I like this a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really liked this, nice poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good stuff here i hear the voice of a passionate person!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow this is so confusing yet with such passion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I am speechless , how can I express my love to your simple poetry , which is the deepest I ever read?

Posted 8 Years Ago


This piece has a very good voice to it and the alliteration makes it flow freely from the tip of my tongue. Read out loud, as poetry is meant to be, makes it even more fun; like reading, "Bubbling babbling brook". If I could make a suggestion, it would be that this piece would greatly benefit from an increase in structure and added punctuation.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the word play in here. It was a good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Simply beautiful ....
I really love this
-Beyourself

Posted 9 Years Ago


Please promise me you'll keep writing. Forever.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful piece of work I really like the style and flow of this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Rae
Rae

Seattle, WA



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18 years old. NYU student and tea enthusiast. Writing means the world to me; feel free to give reviews and help me greater improve. Writing has always been my escape, especially poetry. Life experie.. more..

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