What love really is

I'm not going to describe this. Think for yourself.

I hate you.
And I hate this place.
You know that I'm nothing, but a hollow sad waste.
The smell of hairspray, piss, and death.
Enough to make the crazy go sane.
Makes me wanna finger myself with a f*****g razor blade.

You disgust me.
In all that you do.
I hope you catch fire,
Your lungs explode as you scream...
Your pain is my existence,
Your pleasure is my pain.

Wrap your hand around my throat,
Squeeze until it snaps,
Make love to my rotting corpse,
Leave me laying on my back.
Whisper that you need me,
Turn me black and blue
Please make me realize that I'm nothing without you.

Reviews

[Chaos X 3]

Well, for starters I should say that I hope I am not projecting in any way. This way I can give you a fair and non biased review. The imagery you purveyed was both raw and poignantly descriptive, which is really the only way to really show people how horrid and desperate a situation can be. A "Shock and Awe campaign" if you'd have it. I think that IF this was your aim, then you've definitely hit the mark and in that aspect I'd have to say Great job! :)

Now as a domestic abuse survivor/escapee I do hope that you were lucky enough to escape as well or if you haven't that you will or perhaps you watched someone you love go through it. Best advice I ever got from anyone during that time was the reassurance that "You're not alone."

-Dawn Marie

[Mande ThaBoss BabyGauges]

I appreciate both your review and you're ability to not assume. Thank you.

[Chaos X 3]

I apologize if I over stepped. Unfortunately, I assume too often. I am awesome at making an a*s of myself. :)

[Mande ThaBoss BabyGauges]

You haven't over stepped in any way. I appreciate your concern. Thank you for being genuine. It isn't often that you find that.