Box Rain Dark

The Saga of my undying love.

Spirit, light, shade and dark

I am mysteriously in love with you

 

                         The sun, the moon and the stars

                         I pray to the heaven above that you are the one

 

Hands, kisses, and hugs.

I wish tomorrow will come with promises of real love

 

Rainbow, jewel stone, and fire

Passionate love we both enjoy and cherish

 

Storms, big waves and earthquakes

I’m wondering if we could build a life together

 

                            Space, empty room and box

                            Now my life has no direction

 

Clouds, rain and tears

Now I have lost you

 

Box…Rain…Dark Goodbye my love

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

I love what you did with this poem. Nature just naturally calls out to me in ways that nothing else can. Whether it be in connection to spiritual things or love, nature feels honest. Great title. Each three word choices has me stopping to receive from it.

[marie]

this is a wonderful write, beautifully penned, it is so full of pain, i pray that my love does not find this end, though i know it will not:) lovely words:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Marie :) I am glad you like. Thanks for your thought in this piece.

[marie]

no problem:) i enjoyed the flow of your piece:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[ganga ramesh]

How can someone be mysteriously in love with anyone at all? But I know it is possible after reading this or rather tasted it, because i am mysteriously in love with this piece...it is GREAT..i just loved it:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for stopping, appreciate your review :)

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks A.H you have a cute pic.

[A. H. Pinley]

The kid needs to drink water.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) yea I guess maybe swallow an orio :)

[DIVYA]

Love happens and before we know it...goes too.
You captured the feelings of happiness and loss so well here.
A great write with great truths of life and love.
Wonderful choice of music too.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Div :) yeah this is one of my fave. thanks for the review.

[Gerald Parker]

No comment can do justice to this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks Mr. Gerald

[LadySoDivine]

A very beautiful piece! The love for someone special to us really feels more magical and more magnificent than any wonders in the world, but if we lose that person, no tragedy or catastrophe can compare. This is a strong and emotional poem. Really like it :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Lady glad you like this piece, thanks for the wonderful review. :)

[Guilt]

I feel like the transition of tone escaped me, because it happened too fast. But seriously, this is solid. A classic recipe of metaphors of the romantic world, and the heartbreak realm. I loved the kaleidoscope of terrain.

- Guilt

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for your time reading work Bro.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. Love lead us to joy and pain. I like the description of the birth of love and the lost. No goodbye is a good one. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. for believing, I remember when i wrote my first poem all of my friend doesn't believe to my work, but reading such words from yours it cemented my dreams to carry on. Thanks a lot.

[Arun Paul Kapur]

This is captured so magnificently :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother, thanks for your time reading my work.