Earthquake

Earthquake

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor

Mountain Fuji roars

Cracks Tokyo house's wooden floor

Hiroshi wide awake

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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Again with the imagery! As I said, I'm not familiar with haikus so I can't justifiably critique them, but I really have to commend you for being so consistently awesome. You always put the reader into these worlds you create with so few words, in even as few that make up a haiku. Really great.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) Brother you are always my inspiration. :)



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Again with the imagery! As I said, I'm not familiar with haikus so I can't justifiably critique them, but I really have to commend you for being so consistently awesome. You always put the reader into these worlds you create with so few words, in even as few that make up a haiku. Really great.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) Brother you are always my inspiration. :)
What manga is the picture from? It looks interesting. ;) I really liked the poem!! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks my friend :) I just pick it up from Google :)
I enjoyed it. I think the title elucidates your meaning. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thansk Bro. :)
I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Nature..nice work Marc! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) heheh
Dakshta

9 Years Ago

welcome :)
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Conveys the magnificent fury of nature!
Excellent

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Div, :) you spent your precious time to my work, I am deeply touch with this my friend. Thank.. read more
DIVYA

9 Years Ago

You are welcome Marc. Your work is always a pleasure to read!
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

:) Thanks again.
Nice Marc but the last line has six on!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Lol :) got to perfect it next time Mr. John :) thanks for the reads.

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Added on April 9, 2013
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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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