Puck's Last Breath

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

This was nice. Short and quaint. Keep writing Marc

[InsanityWriter]

Love Puck. :) Nice poem!!

[dave]

Where is this picture from? I really like it. It's really creepy, sort of. The alliteration in your first line really helps the poem flow, and I like that, and I also liked your unique rhyming pattern, it really adds a clever touch of uniqueness to your poem. I sort of giggled at your description- and sorry, again, I can find nothing here to help patch up. It's probably because I'm getting around to these reviews so late. I've been busy, sorry I couldn't get around sooner. And, as usual, nice job.

[Terohime]

Marc you are on your way to great work. Keep moving towards your dreams, no one can stop you but you.
~ With love Your friend Resnera.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Res, I really appreciate it friend :) thanks a lot love yah!

[Terohime]

^^

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.

[Dakshta]

Nice and Sweet :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah :) I like this also :) I play hard with Puck lol :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A sweet little write Marc

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. John, thanks for the support.

[Rita L. Sev]

Well done, this! A fanciful twist - good job!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ms. Rita your words is always my inspiration :)

[DIVYA]

Very original and creative...
So sweet and sad...
Loved the artwork!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah I kill Puck in this piece heheh he is naughty :)

[DIVYA]

:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks Div :)

[DIVYA]

:) welcome Marc!