Dark Rain Box

Dark Rain Box

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor
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- An Alternative Rock Song Lyrics inspired from my Poem "Box Rain Dark"

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Dark Rain Box  

Marc Marlon Villaflor

Dark Alternative Rock Song

I

Shut the door, smashing sound in the hallway

That night we have to say goodbye

Turning down your wish of staying for another day

I am tired of living in this endless lies

All we’ve got is heartaches when we cry

II

Stepping down the stairs it breaks my heart

Remembering those days when we were together

Remembering those kisses that promised a new day

Each moment’s last, pictures perfect

Do you hear me? Hear my voice, before I say

Chorus

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

Bridge

 

Storms, big waves and earthquakes

I’m wondering if we could build a life together

 

Space, empty room and box

Now my life has no direction

 

Clouds rain and tears

Now I have lost you

 

Dark Rain Box Goodbye my love

 

Chorus

  

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

 The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

 Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

 Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

 

 

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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I love the title and the lyrics fit perfectly, you've done a great job here Marc. So true, some people, no matter how much they love one another just aren't good for each other, I think your words will resonate with a lot of people, I know they do for me. Excellent my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Thanks Frie, love your words :) thanks a lot.
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Marc, good to see you back here, always my friend :-)



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Beautiful...you're work is very sublime

Posted 7 Years Ago


The picture and it's quote and the poem itself fit each other, nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Storms, big waves and earthquakes
I’m wondering if we could build a life together

Chaos is chaos whether in nature or relationships it can be beautiful but savage. Well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


quite nice...like gabrielle...i was trying to think of music to go along with...

i feel a cross between Moody Blues and Pink Floyd.

this will get music eventually, Marc.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i am actually thinking/humming of a melody that might fit the lyrics... very catchy chorus =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


like the smashing
like the storms
HAI!!!
good for E/A/B chords

Posted 7 Years Ago


A dark rain box... love that image!

Posted 7 Years Ago


i'd more then likely have to hear this presented to make an avid comment

Posted 7 Years Ago


There is truth and sorrow in this poem. They are dark time when love is not enough. I loved this line from the poem:

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ice :)
As Frieda notes, a great job, the structure perfect for a song, the rhymes excellent. I would ( as a failed songwriter) repeat the Chorus after the Bridge, so that the bridge leads either to a new verse or the refrain. Excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sir :) great inputs I will do it.

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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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