Breathless

Breathless

A Story by Marc Marlon Villaflor
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Breathless is a single track I wrote and produced for Princess Nadia a young pop singer in Saudi Arabia.

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Breathless (A single for Princess Nadia)

Marc Marlon Villaflor

 

A new day comes, I am holding your promise

Things gonna change, I'm hoping for the best

 

Tears in my eyes turned into a frozen rain,

maybe you comeback or you just give me pain

 

I am running now, running with the strong wind

With my heavy heart, I don’t know where to start

 

Why, Why did you leave me all alone, why did you break your promise?

Now, Now I am alone and breathless.

 

Lying on my bed, remembering those sweet moments we have

All I have now, are traces of our greatest love

 

Why, Why did you go away, I am still waiting for the day

Waiting for the day, the day you come back to me,

 

Why, Why did you leave me all alone, why did you break your  promise?

Now, Now I am alone and breathless.

 

© 2014 Marc Marlon Villaflor


Author's Note

Marc Marlon Villaflor
BREATHLESS-Princess Nadia (Original Song)

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"Lying on my bed, remembering those sweet moments we have
All I have now, are traces of our greatest love"
The poem is filled with sadness and memory. Love is missed when it is gone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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beautiful write, eloquently lyrical and touching write...quite stirring

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very lyrical and poignant

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh wow! It's was like I am swayed back to tragic romance films I've watched before. Definitely evolving, the song embodies universality on break-ups, moving on and hope for love to come back. This could be a great soundtrack for movies :-). Kudos!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc, the lyrics are beautiful - broken hearts and bittersweet memories... The music and vocals are great, too - impressive!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

From the heat of hearth fire/heart fire to the froaen wastes of loneliness, from the euphoric summer of Olympian slopes to the gray ash of dispairing Hades--this violent ride of passion and desire

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Lying on my bed, remembering those sweet moments we have
All I have now, are traces of our greatest love"
The poem is filled with sadness and memory. Love is missed when it is gone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pls. give me your honest opinion.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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