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This poem is about a very close friend I had. Throughout life we all go through rough times. There are many people in this world who feel the same way. This is her story

Tears overflowed her face,

Some running into her dry mouth;

The taste of her salty tears

Only making it worst.

Anger and hatred filled her mind.

"Mom and Dad have no right!" se screamed.

She knew the abnormal sensation of her

Own flesh dripping blood would oddly help.

The ram page had begun.

She had enough.

She threw the most important things to the floor.

The parts and pieces covered the ground.

Everything shattered.

Everything broke.

Everything wrong.

She grabbed the brown teddy bear,

Threw it across the room and wondered.

What happened to that once so happy little girl?

She opened the dresser drawer

And grabbed her only help.

She closed her eyes

And bit her pale bottom lip.

The razor glided across her arm

Into the cold, dark, lifeless bathroom sink.

The blood drips:

Drip.Drip.Drip.Drop.

Out of the bathroom,

Into the cold, crowded hallway,

She felt so alone.

He grabbed her by the arm.

His grip brings immediate excruciating pain.

She pulls away.

Aware of what just happened,

He held her in his arms

As tight as he could.

The feeling of someone

Caring for her overwhelmed her.

Tears overflowed her face.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Pax]

I really like the ending, in the most vulnerable time of your life, there will always be someone to be there and just be a friend who listen to your hearts burden... a gripping tale!