loooooooove

reasons

you are unselfish  your heart gives to others    in trouble, sick,talented, or lame   you give so quietly and guard relentlessly

your mind has engaged in a multitude of arenas

your  body has made many lovers swoon

 you play sublime music prepare  intently,  and can make people laugh 

your wit goes on      you walk through my silent   walls like the shadow you are

 you remain you

  m

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WOW! I can hardly think of a better lover to have! You have painted this "other" as being the perfect friend/companion/lover. Conversely, this is how anyone would love to be thought of, by a special other. I mean, the narrator of this is expressing an immense amount of love here, not just pointing out the other person's outpouring of love using sparkling specific details. I thought your title a bit corny at first, but now I truly do feel that you've conveyed a long slow flowing out of looooove (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[marilyn 1225]

Barley you are too kind thank you for your review have learned to put these feelings away and carry on am thankful for everything

[darshu]

Wow.. Great writing..thank you for sharing

[marilyn 1225]

Thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the feel of mystery, desire and wonder in the words. Some people make us wish and dream. Thank you dear Marilyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[marilyn 1225]

Thank you Coyote,,,, wow it only took me a short time to get the feelings out.... you are so kind... worth writing ..again, thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Marilyn and I did like this one. You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

especially like the "walk through my silent walls" part and how you spaced it.
I am reminded of the Connie Stevens' hit "16 reasons"---
"Unselfish" is a primary reason to love someone.
j.

[Wórdsmíth]

couldn't agree more w/ Mr. Cilberto... he makes me to play that song right now, and yes.. so am i listening to it right now...

16 reasons why i love you had been one of the most loveable hit songs in its era.. & i m glad to see that someone still remembers it in 2020...

Marilyn - i'm looking forward to readin' your work.

[marilyn 1225]

thank you so much it was not taken from the song but your kindness in writing is appreciated!