Crying. Unable to stop

for my mother. lost you to cancer

I could write a book and tear it up
no words can ever say enough
for you were my all.
You taught me how to laugh
taught me how to cry,
never to give up but to always try.

You were my super girl
my first choice, my wings
and when i learnt you were ill,
i was there on your side.
Talked to my Jesus about you
and right there in the heat of the day,
you took your last breathe.

So much pain, i could never show,
i can't get it through my head.
I hang my head and want to die.
I'll be crying unable to stop,
for my heart stopped beating when you took your last breathe.
fall in to pieces under the pale moon,
never to find another with that kindness in your eyes.
So rest in peace my mother,
rest in peace my love.

Author's Note

Ignore the mistakes. Was too hurt to be perfect

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

It is all too true...no one will ever love us the way our mothers did. No one will ever care enough in comparison. It is a pain like no other when one's mother passes and watching her suffer makes it even worse. I so understand. Your honest emotions come through loud and clear. May memories comfort you. Lydi**

[Marimartha Mardynz]

Thank you dear. I'm glad that some one understands how i feel. Not that it takes away the pain or eases it, atleast i don't feel so alone

[Lydia Shutter]

I totally understand....and will many others.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You have created a sublime poem of love with a unique theme which I found utterly entrancing. Nicely done indeed! Best wishes

[Marimartha Mardynz]

Thank you dear. I'm glad that some one understands how i feel. Not that it takes away the pain or eases it, atleast i don't feel so alone

[Miss Sharon]

Oh my dear...I SO much feel your pain in this write. Losing someone we love very much is the most horrific pain any human can endure. (I'll be crying unable to stop, for my heart stopped beating when you took your last breathe.) I know this feeling....I lost my only son September of 2011. Although the pain is not as intense as once it was, I still cry for him most every day...or night. Blessings be yours and do keep writing it out. For me it seemed to be therapeutic. ~Sharon

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Oh, I know the pain when we lost someone dear to us; like the feelings your words are depicting, pains and grievance overwhelme. For the lost I could comment"take heart". For the art, nicely penned!