War

War

A Poem by A.A.Solis
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A poem about a war that is going on in a different universe of mine. Most certainly going to re-do this sucky thing. ;p

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A land of brimstone, fire
with a resounding field of ash,
Burned.
Just to find her.
Skies adorned in darkness, black
And plains with pillars of smoke,
Held,
The heroine gone.
Legacy passed from
father to son,
mother to daughter,
Sun to the stars�"
a profound pit of mercy.
History carved on the skin
of the living
through an endless war -
forgotten and scarring. 
Iron will and daunting fear,
wrapped up in a single tear.
Forgotten and hardened,
with the thrill of days gone,
the war wages.

© 2013 A.A.Solis


Author's Note

A.A.Solis
I am fully aware this sucks kthnx.

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I liked the imagery here. Nice flow as well. Thank you for sharing!
Anna

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.A.Solis

10 Years Ago

Thank you! How kind! ;w;

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