Overdrive

Overdrive

A Poem by Mark
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Just driving in from work, and a nifty little ditty suggested itself...

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May a big bag of God's richest Blessing
Pursue you each day, this Year

May you avoid situations distressing;
When waking, greet each day with a cheer!

May there be much more hugs and caressing;
(Are you listening, as I bend your ear?)

This my wish, I'm  hopefully confessing:
That we all get our lives in High Gear!

Mark Teague
12-31-2011

© 2011 Mark


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Kindness and love, the hopeful spirit of the season, are part of your poem "Overdrive". What a perfect poem for that trying time of year!
Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful, caring Christmas poem!
~el

Posted 8 Years Ago


This reminded me of the Irish prayer,...May the road rise up to meet you. It was gorgeous. Thankyou.

Posted 8 Years Ago


May this year touch you in gentle ways
and leave a smile in its wake.

Chris

Posted 8 Years Ago


Agree with this poem and the statement of the last line "That we all get our lives in High Gear!" The poem felt heart felt and true as we should all be in high gear in to changing our lives for the better. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you for your kind, uplifting wishes for 2012! Hoping for the high gear ever so much better than last year... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I needed that thank you.You know often i read your work and feel so intimidated by the choice of wording and the intelligence in the text .I thank you for not making me feel inferior

Posted 8 Years Ago


Haha, I'm enjoying your humorous and witty style of writing. Nice poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Funny well-written poem, love the inversion situations distressing and the bend your ear line.Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Smiling at your generous poem, wishing friends and more such wonderful blessings, thank you, Mark .. could I add a little calm contemplation somewhere along the way .. that High Gear can get a bit much sometimes. (You)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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