Advice

Advice

A Poem by Martha Gilleece
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just something silly

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Is there ever not a time
when a smile is the only appropriate line?
What if you witness a crime,
a brutal one, a murder of some kind?
A man in all black covered in blood,
but what if that man was a total stud?
Should I remain and stand
or offer a helping hand? 

© 2012 Martha Gilleece


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Awesome! Lol Perhaps it is for this reasoning that there have always been male and female duo's in the world of villains, such as Bonnie and Clyde. Nicely woven words. Brought a smile and laugh, Good job!

Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


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. superbly written and very powerful ...

. someone very wise taught me "do what you can until you can do more" ...

. one day, i hope i can reach that perfect "more" ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the opening line to this one....its very good and its what i take away from this write.



Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 7, 2012
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Martha Gilleece
Martha Gilleece

Brooklyn , NY



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