Goodnight Moon

Goodnight Moon

A Poem by marty360

I try to sleep,

But there’s a feeling I can’t escape,

The ocean parts our body,

But the heart binds our souls.

 

No matter what the distance,

Know that I’ll be there soon,

I’ll hold you close,

As we both look at the same Goodnight Moon.

© 2013 marty360


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Great romanticism in this piece. And like Luke said, it would fit well in a hallmark card.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Captivating but this begs for more...

Posted 7 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)..................

Posted 7 Years Ago


marty360

7 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
You should write Hallmark cards ^.^

Posted 7 Years Ago


marty360

7 Years Ago

Tell me how and I'll apply :P

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Added on December 19, 2013
Last Updated on December 19, 2013
Tags: sleep, dream, atlantic, ocean, heart, soul, distance, goodnight, moon, go radio

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marty360
marty360

Bradford/Huddersfield, West Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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A Poem by marty360