Dogs on a Clear Day

The blasted heath cuts straight into grey.

Animals and clover

Turn away smiling. I make them happy.

 

The bicycle has no trail of fumes.

The half-fast

Snail, her colorless shell

Shuffling in giddy silence.

 

Some of this evening the

Evening has been sunlit.

 

A black nightshade taken in.

My skin is a carnival dance, the near

Hills freeze my lungs.

I am wooed

Into an inferno

Crammed with stones and strange women -

A heavy ambition suffocates.

Reviews

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My evening was sunlit too and it transported me right here :) x's

[Heaven]

This was beautiful and drew me in very quickly. Thank you for letting me read this!

[Rosalind Gale]

You are very welcome -
-x-

[Baby Ricochet]

That's some kind of clear view garden

[Rosalind Gale]

Cheers Ric -
-x-

[rutherford]

Wonderful, provocative combinations of words...stones and strange women...heavy ambition suffocates...I also enjoyed the transposing of
Some of this evening the
Evening has been sunlit.

Strong poem

[Rosalind Gale]

Thank you so much!
-x-

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Rosalind Gale]

Thank you, and 'hello' -
-x-

[A. Amos]

Hi and you're most welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i got lost in the wonderful abstractness of this mesmerizing piece.

night and day stand opposed and i am caught in between suffocating in both the light and the darkness...but it is a happy, blissful suffocation.

[Rosalind Gale]

Thanks my friend -
-x-

[Cory Barrett]

This is fantastic, for what ever reason i find it spell binding. I just keep drinking in these damn word as if i am parched.

[Rosalind Gale]

Thank you very much -
-x-

[Rosalind Gale]

Ah you took me really into this. You have such a talent, Rosie. And so unpredictable, as well, and also full of surreal and real visions you create, there is a perfect juxtaposition, of dark and light here. I do admire your dark mind, in this one. And how you do describe to be dragged to hell... fantastic. It takes a good writer to do that with me...

- Elisa

[Rosalind Gale]

*blush* Hey, I will be over to you soon, also I will write you a message!
-xx-

Take your time my dear, no rush with me... :) I'm glad to see you around, even briefly! Much love my friend -xx- :) until then.

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful, splendid, magical...:).......................

[Rosalind Gale]

And once more, thanks! It is so pleasant for me to read such lovely words from you.
-x-

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[Corset]

I sat here and read this about 10 times, and as I do I just close my eyes and let it have it's way with my mind. I can only say how brilliant and special your talent is just so many times, so I hope this small offering will be enough. x

[Rosalind Gale]

-x-