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A Poem by maryjaneuy
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She was looking at you with all her might

But suddenly you were out of sight

Guess staring at you isn't her right

That fact makes her chest feel tight

Her day already seems like night

'Cause it's you who gives it light

Maybe she's way too tired to fight.

© 2012 maryjaneuy


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Nice flow of words and I like the emotion in the poem. Some people can make us become scare to express our desire. I like the closing lines to the excellent poem.
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Posted 11 Years Ago



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maryjaneuy
maryjaneuy

Muntinlupa City, Philippines



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Jane. 15. Philippines. hi there! I'm Jane. :) Fifteen years living in this very wonderful world. Not just your typical girl. Haha. :D I'm just a newbie here and i was just inspired by my friends.. more..

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