Joy

Joy

A Poem by maryjaneuy
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My first Tanka. I just saw it in my files. I wrote this when I was second year high. :) Hope you like it. :)

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Let joy be in you.

It's end to all misery.

Live long and laugh loud,

Lives without joy cause much pain.

Bring joy for those who you love!

© 2010 maryjaneuy


Author's Note

maryjaneuy
As you noticed, it's really short and made up of only five lines. It is a TANKA. :)

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And a very good Tanka too.

I must say it is refreshing to read work by a young poet that isn't full of curse words. Your poetry is a joy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha! What a lovely noise! Let there be Joy and there was Joy!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love the message in this piece! I love positive writing and writing that has a good meaning behind it. It is short but really sweet. Great poem! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great write! I liked the simplicity of this, and thought that it was a really effective way of expressing the message of joy. I loved the line 'Live long and laugh loud', and I thought that your poem held a lot of truth. Nice write,
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Not sure what a Tanka is, but i like it. nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really nice with a wonderful message. Great job on this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very fine.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That poem put the joy in me...nice read for a Sunday morning, nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved this. It made me smile and was so uplifting. It's amazing how something so short can say so much. Wonderful =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


You are so right Mayjane.....however it still may not end all mierry.....smile......thanks for the messsage......congrats!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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