Silence

Silence

A Poem by Maria M
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my first poem.. however its more a recollection of my thoughts :)

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Voices in my head scream louder than my words
Feelings buried would forever be unheard
Broken thrusts and disappointments 
Forgetting life's own enjoyment'

Won't forget the days I spent in school
Figuring out what I really wanted to do
Was it me threw it all away?
Was it me that decided not to stay?

If I make my way back now I shall be lost
If I lose myself right now, I sure won't hold. 

© 2013 Maria M


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Don't lose yourself! This is a very nice write! Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

haha i'll try not to :) Thanks Chris :D :D
expressive and flew well... But would be better if metered :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Adam, and yes I agree :)
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

thank you for writing
Expressed your feelings very well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much Zainul! :)
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome,lovely poetess! :)
This is wonderful =) Well-written; short, but sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Thanks you so much Tracey C. Its much appreciated :D
Tracey C.

8 Years Ago

You are very welcome! =))
Trapped eitherway...or found the destination anyway.
Memories teach valubale lessons for the future to hold..
Surpressed feelings and residual emotions...
Voices in your head...yes so i know..
i feel so too at times.
thx Maria..cheers to the good times!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Memories may remind you of your mistakes but at least they teach you a lesson, together with mistake.. read more
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

yes i did missy
Use your poetry to focus your thoughts...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

I try but I haven't written a poem in such a long time. But i'll try I promise!

Thanks.. read more
Chris

8 Years Ago

Poetry will help you express your emotions. You're welcome.
such a nice poem....even i'd like to say that it;s not just a poem...I''s merely a REALTY that shows real truthness........i loved it much than others...,so..i wanna Ggive u this time 87/100....if u b don't mind then can i've say sth to u .........
let's have a look below:-)
"SILENCE THAT CAN't AVOIDANCE,
IF I WANNA MY LIFE BACK,THEN IT SOUND;S LIKE A CREATION OF VIOLENCE,
IF I LOSE MYSELF RIGHT NOW,THEN WHERE'S MY ARROGENCE,
THE WORD SILENCE SHOWS TO KNOW ALL ABOUT IT'S FIGURANCE + FRAGRANCE,WITHOUT ANY HINDRANCE.........."
"IF U WANNA ASK ,THAT WHT'S A SILENCE,
THEN I'D LIKE TO SAY THAT SILENCE IS SILENCE THAT INFLUENCE OUR'S ALONNESS,
COZ......IT CAN'T BE IGGNORANCE,
IT'S ALWAY'S APPEAR'S WHEN THING'S CONVERTED INTO NATURAL-DISSAPEARANCE,
OUR'S LONLEYNESS IS ALL ABOUT SILENCE,
THAT SCREAMING US WHENEVER WE BECOME SO VIOLENCE;
SILENCE SOMETIMES HELP'S US TO MAKE + BRING NEW THINGS WITH OUR ALLOWANCE,
INFLATION IN SILENCE, HELP'S TO KNOW BETTER ABOUT HIMSELF + OUR SELFNESS + FOOLISHNESS;
COZZZZZZZZZZZZ.........
IT'S ALL ABOUT SILENCE.....SILENCE......SILENCE.............
"WHEN A STUDENT MAKES NOISE IN HIS/HER CLASSROOM WITH FINANCE;
TEACHER SAY'S ; PAY ATTENTION, IT'S NOT UR'S HOME RESISTANCE........"
SO..I'D SAY......IT'S ALL ABOUT SILENCE..........SILENCE........SILENCE............

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing! :)

and I do agree with you, silence does bring about loneline.. read more
krish

8 Years Ago

YEAH....but that's only for make a line.....that's why i did use a word alone...
It's good.
"Broken thrusts and disappointments " emphasizing the human life.

'If I make my way back now I shall be lost
If I lose myself right now, I sure won't hold'

I feel salt in my eyes.

You say you are 18. but how could you write as if you are 30?


Posted 8 Years Ago


Maria M

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment Pradeep, its is very much appreciated :)

This was the first.. read more

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Maria M
Maria M

Zabbar, Catholic, Malta



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